Monday, 14 September 2015

Screenplay - Script Treatment

Aggressive Team-talk - Working title

The movie starts with a man stating that: He's 'Had enough of this' and storms off to the changing rooms:

An extreme close up of a clearly agitated man's face slowly zooms out until it's a close up, the man is sweating, dripping with rage.

He begins to talk to some people off the screen shouting at them for being passionless, over paid fools, with no interest in playing for the shirt, more concerned about what they're going to be doing when they arrive home.

Some emotional music begins to play as he starts belting on about how the other team are a bunch of nobodies, a Mickey Mouse club.

It becomes increasingly evident in the next paragraph that who he's speaking to aren't adults.

He makes statements like: Every Sunday the same crap, week after week, being bullied by the bigger kids, imagine what they will say when they see you on Monday, the abuse will be unbearable, all due to your foolishness for taking this game lightly - THIS IS NOT A JOLLY

The camera pans round to see a room of startled, young children, clearly shaken by what the man has just said.n

They all run out and leave the room quickly for the second half.

The camera pans around the 7 a side pitch on a warm Sunday morning
More than one game being played at the same time
Other parents comforting their startled children and wishing them good luck and to "Try their best"
The second half starts, Chances get missed a montage of his facial expressions clearly shows his anger as he throws his cap down and screams,

Late on there's a chance for his team, the keeper brings down the striker, a penalty is given.

He looks away and can't look, a chance of saving a point has suddenly appeared he looks away

The penalty is taken in slow motion, he hears cheers, he screams with jubilation, then he turns around and realizes the other team have saved the penalty, it zooms on his face and end with him saying " OOOOOHHH F"


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